Evaluation for Question #8613

Failed to parse evaluation data as JSON: Control character error, possibly incorrectly encoded. Content: { "score": "4", "overall_comment": "The essay attempts to address the task by discussing both the positive economic effects and negative social effects of advertisements. However, the essay is severely hindered by numerous grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, and a lack of coherence and cohesion. The ideas presented are not well-organized, and the language used is often unclear, making it difficult to understand the writer's points. There is a need for significant improvement in all areas, particularly in grammar and coherence.", "task_response": { "score": "4", "comment": "The essay attempts to discuss both views on the effects of advertisements, as the task requires. However, the discussion lacks depth and clarity. The points made are often unclear due to poor language and grammar. The writer's own opinion is briefly mentioned but not well-developed or supported with clear arguments. Greater elaboration and clearer expression of ideas are needed to enhance task response." }, "coherence_cohesion": { "score": "4", "comment": "The essay lacks a clear structure, and the ideas are not well-connected. There is a lack of paragraphing, making it difficult to follow the argument. Transitions between ideas and paragraphs are missing, leading to a lack of cohesion. The essay needs a clearer organization with well-defined paragraphs and linking words to improve coherence." }, "lexical_resource": { "score": "4", "comment": "The essay shows a limited range of vocabulary, with frequent spelling and word choice errors. Many words are misspelled, and some word choices are inappropriate, making the meaning unclear at times. A wider range of vocabulary and more accurate word usage are needed to improve lexical resource." }, "grammatical_accuracy": { "score": "3", "comment": "There are numerous grammatical errors throughout the essay, including errors in sentence structure, verb forms, and punctuation. These errors significantly impede understanding. The essay requires substantial improvement in grammatical range and accuracy to convey ideas more clearly and effectively." }, "feedback_by_paragraphs": { "introduction": { "content": "advertisements have been recoginse in around world some people think That advertisments to have postitive economic effects but some peoples Still think there are negatie soudu effets because in do'viduous are not sati skied with whe They are and what they have I will give Discuss and give my may own opinion about both views.", "feedback": "The introduction attempts to outline the topic and indicate that both views will be discussed. However, it is plagued by numerous spelling and grammatical errors, making it difficult to understand. It lacks a clear thesis statement, and the purpose of the essay is not clearly stated." }, "body_paragraph_1": { "content": "Yes advertisements have positive economic effects. First, ad vertisemers inr. In traduce in troduce their produces To The peoples make them wout To have Them That include large of a maint of money will came to The com pony Thar also they have to pay more takes for goverment motke That boost economic on Seto seccondly, This effects also gain some w reward for the peoples, some advertisements are said about hunger, homeless child, To ask donation from a peoples crowd The world, HR", "feedback": "This paragraph attempts to discuss the positive economic effects of advertisements but is very confusing due to poor language and organization. Ideas are not clearly presented or supported with examples. The paragraph lacks coherence, and the points made are difficult to follow." }, "body_paragraph_2": { "content": "However, some peoples Think there are negative social effects. First, Fake produck or expering product this make peoples make um pappy due to the adver ismers said that it will help you you on To Kill your deads Kin,... Secondly, gamble, aduts content are makong parents when They let their kid Using Their Techology, For ear dexomple, Pop up That many peoples have saw it bexore, The content That They give Just gamble with a hot model when you IT & Jury Shaw up out of no Where hadke people revig Frustion. Finally, bad products shoes, bags, shirrs, ave may Things Ther you wants to houve Some adverstimets said it very warm, clean, make 100% from coton, but when you have it, is all dikkerne.", "feedback": "This paragraph attempts to discuss the negative social effects of advertisements but is very difficult to understand due to numerous errors. The points are not clearly articulated, and the paragraph lacks coherence and cohesion. There is a need for clearer expression and more logical organization of ideas." }, "conclusion": { "content": "in con alusion