Evaluation for Question #8613

Failed to parse evaluation data as JSON: Control character error, possibly incorrectly encoded. Content: { "score": "5", "overall_comment": "The essay addresses the task by discussing both views; however, it lacks clarity and depth in the arguments presented. There are frequent grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, which affect the overall coherence and readability of the essay. The lexical range is limited, and there is a need for better organization and more precise language.", "task_response": { "score": "5", "comment": "The essay attempts to discuss both views and provides an opinion. However, the arguments are not well-developed, and some points are not clearly explained or supported with relevant examples. The conclusion is also somewhat vague, failing to clearly state the writer's position." }, "coherence_cohesion": { "score": "5", "comment": "The essay has a basic structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. However, ideas are not logically organized, and there is a lack of clear transitions between sentences and paragraphs. This affects the flow of the essay and makes it difficult for the reader to follow the argument." }, "lexical_resource": { "score": "5", "comment": "There is a limited range of vocabulary, and some words are used incorrectly, such as 'benifical' and 'disorders' (intended as 'disorders'). The essay relies on repetitive language, and there are several spelling errors. There is a need for more precise and varied vocabulary to effectively convey the intended meaning." }, "grammatical_accuracy": { "score": "4", "comment": "The essay contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms, subject-verb agreement issues, and sentence fragments. These errors often obscure the meaning and reduce the overall clarity of the essay. Greater attention to grammatical accuracy is needed." }, "feedback_by_paragraphs": { "introduction": { "content": "It is argue that advertisements bring about positive economic development between advertisements have an negative impact on social since individuals are dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. In this essay, I will analyze both points of view and give my opinion.", "feedback": "The introduction attempts to outline the essay's focus but contains grammatical errors and lacks clarity. The phrase 'It is argue' should be 'It is argued', and 'between advertisements have an negative impact' is confusing. A clearer thesis statement would improve the introduction." }, "body_paragraph_1": { "content": "Advertisements are benifical to the economy of country. One major reason is that it can help businesses gain prohit and boost sales. This means that when products are widespread promoted, it might attract a wide range of customer buy it; as a result, businesses can earn more money from marketing. Secondly, advertisements can create job for people. This is because marketing requires a plenty of workers in such fields such as model, cameraman, people who write transcript, makeup artist,..For instance, a local fashion brand want to promote their products; therefore, they have to hire some model, cameraman, makeup artist,..to conduct a marketing video.", "feedback": "This paragraph presents some valid points about the economic benefits of advertisements, but it is marred by frequent errors in spelling and grammar, such as 'benifical', 'prohit', 'widespread promoted', and 'a plenty of'. The use of 'customer' should be 'customers'. The examples provided are relevant but could be developed further to strengthen the argument." }, "body_paragraph_2": { "content": "Despite its positive impacts, it is said that there are some drawbacks of community. Firstly, individuals are disappointed with what they have because of advertisements manipulate people to do the same. For example, nowadays, many Vietnamese people are using same washing powder called "Omo" and "Ariel". This is because they are promoted everywhere. Secondly, advertisements create unrealistic beauty standards. This means that some bussinesses manipulate people by saying to the customers must buy their products if they want to be more beautiful. This issue can cause disoders and individuals might be feel stress with what they are being.", "feedback": "The paragraph attempts to outline the negative social effects of advertising but lacks coherence and clear explanations. Phrases like 'there are some drawbacks of community' are unclear. The point about beauty standards is relevant but could be articulated more clearly. Errors such as 'disoders' and 'bussinesses' should be corrected." }, "conclusion": { "content": "In conclusion, advertisements have both postitive financial impacts and negative social impacts. It depends on such situations how people use and deal with it. Personally, I partly agree with marketing cause some disadvantages with our social media.", "feedback": "The conclusion is brief and does not