Evaluation for Question #8613

Some people think advertisements may have positive economic effects whereas others think there are negative social effects because individuals are not satisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is argue that advertisements bring about positive economic development between advertisements have an negative impact on social since individuals are dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. In this essay, I will analyze both points of view and give my opinion.
   Advertisements are benifical to the economy of country. One major reason is that it can help businesses gain prohit and boost sales. This means that when products are widespread promoted, it might attract a wide range of customer buy it; as a result, businesses can earn more money from marketing. Secondly, advertisements can create job for people. This is because marketing requires a plenty of workers in such fields such as model, cameraman, people who write transcript, makeup artist,..For instance, a local fashion brand want to promote their products; therefore, they have to hire some model, cameraman, makeup artist,..to conduct a marketing video.
  Despite its positive impacts, it is said that there are some drawbacks of community. Firstly, individuals are disappointed with what they have because of advertisements manipulate people to do the same. For example, nowadays, many Vietnamese people are using same washing powder called "Omo" and "Ariel". This is because they are promoted everywhere. Secondly, advertisements create unrealistic beauty standards. This means that some bussinesses manipulate people by saying to the customers must buy their products if they want to be more beautiful. This issue can cause disoders and individuals might be feel stress with what they are being.
  In conclusion, advertisements have both postitive financial impacts and negative social impacts. It depends on such situations how people use and deal with it. Personally, I partly agree with marketing cause some disadvantages with our social media.

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